Thank you for inviting me to your project, and congratulations on completing a working manuscript!
As a writer/editor myself, I know how to edit your work while respecting your style and intentions. I appreciate the risk you're taking by asking another person to evaluate work that you haven't finished yet. I've performed the evaluative service you need on dozens of scripts, when I formerly worked for a prominent regional theatre. Also...
With TWELVE+ YEARS OF EXPERIENCE WRITING and EDITING FICTION, I've got thousands of hours of knowledge to bring to the editing process. It sounds like you are looking for developmental/structural editing. This involves assessing the book and helping you identify places to improve storytelling and action. I also consider things like tone/message/style, to help you build that steamy story into a bonfire!
My bid is for up to 8 hours of work and 2 hours real-time communication, if desired (skype, chat, phone, etc.). The 8 hours include: (1) reading and evaluating your manuscript, and (2) preparing a "report" of findings and making recommendations. Then we can discuss and expand on that report in real-time, if you care to.
Please read my reviews. I don’t do lots of work on this site, but my reviews will tell you how I always go the extra mile for my clients to give them the best possible product.
If you chose to reach out, I'd be delighted to send you a sample of my genre fiction.
Thank you for considering my bid!
Anna