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SVG Drone Animation

I create Animation with SVG Format. for download file Please visit: https://drive.google.com/file/d/11PHh27tVhiHJ4Jc51wkAL-qgAdbo4yEA/view

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  • ddirks
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    Great improvement! I'm really impressed! Here is my feedback:
    - the drones do not have flashing lights - could you please add that?
    - let's try to make the drones more realistic like here (https://goo.gl/9SZTDJ)
    - Probably we can add some scrolling led messages? Let's try this one:
    "Earn crypto with your drone"

    Thank you so much!
    Daniel

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  • mangugeng
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    for the improvement please visit:
    https://sendeyo.com/up/d/6773e399a7

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  • mangugeng
    mangugeng
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    Its the improvement.
    https://svgshare.com/i/81S.svg

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    1. ddirks
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      Great, thanks! Here is my feedback:
      - I love how you made the buildings more futuristic on the left side
      - Could you please extend this futuristic style also to all the other buildings?
      - The drones should not fly simultaneously, but different to each other
      - Please get rid of the dark blue - it was not a good idea from my side
      - Let two out of the three red wearing people have a dark and light blue outfit
      - do you have any ideas how to add some more motion elements? (can we do something with moving text like on the buildings on time square?

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  • ddirks
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    Cool, here is my feedback:
    - it's unclear which guy is controlling the drone on the right side
    - all guys controlling the drones (only one per drone) should have a tablet in hands
    - probably you can add a third drone & pilot in the left area
    - the drones should start and fly independently from each other
    - make all the buildings light grey like in your original version (see here at the top)
    - can you choose some more futuristic buildings?
    - the drones should always flash with a green and/or red light (also when they fly)

    Thanks! We are really close!
    Daniel

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    1. mangugeng
      mangugeng
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      thanks, I will fix it.

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  • mangugeng
    mangugeng
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    its my improvement..
    https://svgshare.com/i/7wz.svg

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    1. mangugeng
      mangugeng
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      or with flash
      https://sendeyo.com/up/d/225f5688ad

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  • ddirks
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    - Please make the drone white and feel free to add some flashing light to it
    - Make the Drone only move up and down, just a little to the side and it has to move slower
    - Get rid of the people moving - it looks a unnatural
    - Take the Logo version with plain light blue
    - Add two more people with drones
    - instead of black you should use our dark blue
    - use our red for some clothes of the people

    Thanks!

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    1. mangugeng
      mangugeng
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      thank you for your feedback, please wait the my improvement

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  • ddirks
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    Also, would be great to have more futuristic buildings like these ones: https://www.google.de/search?q=futuristic+city&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwidpuPA2fncAhVMaVAKHTEJAZcQ_AUICigB&biw=1920&bih=943 I would agree with your earlier draft and get rid of the blue colored buildings.

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  • ddirks
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    Cool, here is my feedback:

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  • mangugeng
    mangugeng
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    Hello I finished my improvement. Please check this Link.
    http://svgur.com/s/7sH

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    1. mangugeng
      mangugeng
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      or
      https://svgshare.com/i/7sH.svg

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  • mangugeng
    mangugeng
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    thanks your feedback, iwill fix it

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  • ddirks
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    I like it very much! Let's get rid of the people standing/sitting on the buildings cause it does not make sense. ;) As drone models you should have a look at the models of DJI (www.dji.com). Also, a drone is normally put to the ground by a person first, the he starts it with a tablet in his hands and it is way more slower moving that in your example. It would be best if there were two or three people doing it. Make one of the buildings the BEE2B headquarter with the logo on the top. Also, try to have some more motion integrated in the animation. You can probably also add some more color, like the light blue of our CI. Thanks!

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  • mangugeng
    mangugeng
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    sample for embeded website:
    http://svgur.com/s/7qg

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